Failing Looked Better-New Original Song Demo-Caveman

Failing Looked Better-New Original Song Demo-Caveman


WIP for a possible concept album, this is just a rough idea of what the song will be, should I decided to actually do the album. Just posted this to get any feedback on better choice of words for the lyrics, and constructive criticism is of course welcome :) ~Joe Lyrics So I said to the sky “Please rain down” I can’t keep living my life Hell, I don’t even know how It’s nights like this, I wonder To the stars that I am under Who am I? Who am I? So let’s hear it for the gods that broke my will Lines of coke and scripture to keep me still I don’t know who I am Don’t know who you are Scribble this pen on pads of paper A Thousand pages saved for later Broken lyrics, empty lines Thinkin’ I have lost my mind Mine is not a life worth taking No, this high aint worth the breaking down I’m breaking down So let’s hear it for the gods that broke my will Lines of coke and scripture to keep me still I don’t know who I am Don’t know who you are Lock myself up in my basement These voices won’t keep me sane No…. I’m cutting all my skin away Let it bleed and I’ll be okay So let’s hear it for the gods that broke my will Lines of coke and scripture to keep me still I don’t know who I am Don’t know who you are And I don’t know these faces Don’t recognize the places Empty walls will mirror empty eyes Tighten the belt, push it in and die So yeah, pretty dark shit, let me know what you think, it is still very much a WIP. ~Caveman

 

Longtime Elton John bassist Robert Wayne Birch found dead in apparent suicide
Filed under: drug addiction suicide

TMZ reports that there were no signs of drug abuse, and there was no suicide left behind. Los Angeles County Assistant Coroner Chief Ed Winter confirmed to Reuters that the case is "being investigated as a possible suicide.” The musician had been with …
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He watched wife's suicide, then felt heat of the law
Filed under: drug addiction suicide

Researching methods of suicide. • Talking about feeling hopeless or having no purpose. • Talking about being in unbearable pain or feeling trapped. • Talking about being a burden to others. • Increasing the use of alcohol or drugs. • Acting anxious or …
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