This Is a Rewrite of a Previous Poem About Drugs. How Do U Like It.?

Question by The Dark Prince: This is a rewrite of a previous poem about drugs. How do u like it.?
“addiction”

The hour of my time draws ever near,
Judgement day has now come and gone.
Sweetly she draws me up into her arms,
Her scent like anyother day.

Take me under your soft black wings,
Hold me tight and remember me please.
So gently she sucks away at my time,
She holds me as close as ever can be.

She is the dark mistress of many,
Yet beholden to no one at all.
Eternal engagment, never consumated,
I know I’m not the only one.

Another gray morning, an ashen sky,
My sweet demon she whispers to me.
Stumbling my way into her sweet arms,
I’m as close as I can ever be.
yes, she is a drug.

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